Key to clearer writing: Be consistent

Key to clearer writing: Be consistent

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Some things about writing better are hard, but others are quite simple—like being consistent.

There are many ways to help you write clearly. Some are harder than others. But here’s one that is super simple: be consistent.

Be consistent in things like how you spell and capitalize words, how you order lists, how you group sentences together and organize your paragraphs.

☑ Why does consistency matter?

You may wonder what’s the big deal with being consistent.

What does it matter if you don’t alphabetize a list? Or whether you switch between “email” and “e-mail” or use both “Project” and “project” in a document?

Actually, readers notice these things. And they will spend time wondering if “Program” means something different from “program,” get distracted from your story, and even start questioning your credibility.

Remember this image from my post about how knowing the big picture helps you write clearly?

Image of a straight, paved road down an alley of trees and another of a winding road with hairpin turns going up a steep mountain.
You as the writer are like a driver; the reader is your passenger. Knowing the big picture means you know the path you are going to take, the sights you are going to show, and the destination. For most writing, you may want to aim for the straight path rather than the twisted one.

Being consistent helps keep the reader on the path that you set out for them. It keeps them from wandering off into the woods or falling off the edge of a cliff.

☑ Tips to be consistent

Here are some things you can look at, especially when you’re editing.

▶ Alphabetize lists

Image of written letters A, B, C and 1, 2, 3

If you have lists, especially lists of countries or organizations or people, alphabetize them!

If you don’t, readers may read way too much into the order. They might think, “Why is this country/organization/person at the bottom of this list? Is it somehow less important than the others?”

If you are listing items in some other order, then simply state it: “listed in the order of program size/year of participation/number of participants/funding,” etc.

▶ Group similar ideas and avoid flip-flopping

Group similar ideas together, whether they are paragraphs or sentences or even words. This will help you avoid going back and forth between two opposing ideas.

When you go back and forth (I call it “flip-flopping”), it makes it harder for the reader to keep up.

Think of it like a hairpin turn in a road. Every time you turn that U-shaped corner, the reader (passenger) has to hang on tight to stay in their seat. It’s more work for them.

Here’s an example paragraph:

"The pandemic devastated the world, although some countries managed better than others. However, people in vulnerable conditions were hard-hit." Compare that to: "Although some countries managed better than others, most of the world suffered from the pandemic. People in vulnerable conditions were esp. hard-hit."
An example paragraph where similar ideas aren’t vs are grouped together. Which do you find easier to follow? (The arrows represent the direction of a statement. You can see the hairpin turns, right?)

Stating something and then using a transition word to present the opposite idea is perfectly fine, but you just don’t want to do it too often.

▶ Tell readers what to expect and do what you said you’d do

Image of a street map and a pencil for navigation
Not following what you say you will do: it’s like giving directions and then demonstrating by going a different route.

If you state that you are going to discuss three points, make sure you discuss three points, not two, not four.

Make sure that each point is distinct too (the boundaries of each point has to be clean). You can do this for example by

  • Giving each point its own paragraph
  • Using a bulleted list (don’t be afraid of using lists)
  • Saying it in words (“First,” “Second,” “Third”) — although you might want to use these sparingly and avoid them if you have more than three or so points
  • Using subheadings, if each point is more than one paragraph long: state your point as the subheading and then explain below

And if you say

We will discuss A, B, and C.

…then explain

✓ A → B → C

in that order, not

✖ A → C → B


Being consistent is so simple that there’s no excuse not to do it! What other ways can you be consistent?

This is an elaboration from part of the 1-hour virtual workshop for UNITAR Hiroshima Office staff that I gave in November 2020.

If you would like to discuss whether we might be a good fit for your writing project or a training on clear writing, please get in touch via the contact form or info@theclarityeditor.com.

Cover photo by Karolina Grabowska, “ABC” photo by Hebi B., and map photo by Narcis Ciocan from Pixabay.

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